Do you like my poem "adrift"? And how did it make you feel? - curtains sailing theme
Arches sunset curtain of night
humiliated by a blanket of stars in vain.
entered a period of Lunar Sea
as the air was still laughing at my candles and my scars.
One last night in the coffin to drive
Currents in the cruel and too far from home.
Salt in the nose,
Moisture in my shoes.
surrounded by life,
However, always alone.
we make the last shot of wine.
we drink a toast to our bitter defeat
lift the cup to the prey of the vulture
our flesh becomes softer for the feast of carrion.
© AB07 "
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Curtains Sailing Theme Do You Like My Poem "adrift"? And How Did It Make You Feel?
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struggle and fight for Servive died Life.What ie, he is courageous, the life in death. Nice poem. write more.
It is good and has the last book on depression and sadness (although it could be stronger), and perhaps even despair
a poem about the end of everything. In the face of death with contempt. Interesting. Well.
I loved a little, but also confusing.
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